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Down the Yellow Brick Road

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As Nightmare Night approaches us lowly humans, the ponies have already had their fun. Here we have AJ in her Scarecrow costume, appropriately feeling a little uneasy on her hooves. After receiving the vial of yellow ink I had ordered in the mail, I've now got the full essentials set of black, white, yellow, blue, and red inks, and am anxious to try more mixing and application in pieces like this and my previous Octavia drawing. While overall pleased with the mixes I created, I realize that AJ's coat ought to be a duller orange. I'm not quite happy with the abstract lines used for the sky background, either; gotta find a better way to convey that, or maybe I should have just left it blank.

This was originally conceived as a group pic, but AJ was too big to let the other two ponies I had planned to be with her get their proper exposure. You can look forward to those other individual portraits soon.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

okay first off the line art is good. Your ponies anatomy is great, however I think the impact here could be improved by maybe showing Applejack's ears popping out of the hat. The colouring is'nt very good in the background. The sky would have looked better if you had'nt just done lines and instead solid colouring, the sky looks like its raining with the sun shining.

At first glance I could'nt tell why her legs were shaking, maybe make a more worried expression to convey that she's worried about falling. Also making her whold body up to her bust shaking would have conveyed that she was having trouble walking. If I were you I would have made her head leaning a bit down, well because nobody looks back while theyre trying to walk.

Overall a nice drawing but I think theres much room for improvment~!